The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job with the topic. Well done and well written.

God bless~
This is a good rendering of that bible story.

We don't rewrite the bible to make it better or more true but we rewrite it to make our hearts live in the stories. I think you have done this.

Keep the bible open before you as you continue writing.
I am always amazed by David's deep respect for Saul despite his ill treatment and persecution of him.

You very bravely brought this story alive.

Well done.
An interesting re-telling of an old story! This is an easy and enjoyable read. Good job!