The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/14
A very intense read with issues that face many young couples today, (and older ones as well) --well done.

God bless~
Yes, a good marriage grows stronger by building blocks together.

The short sentences had impact in the right places.

The situation was well outlined in your story.
Wow. Excellent work.
05/15/14
Good, tight story. How true that all the pressures of the world can cause our edifices to crumble if we don't watch out and keep our eyes on Jesus.
05/15/14
Congrats!

God bless~
Well deserved . . .

Congratulations!
Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV