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Topic: Digital Detox (04/24/14)
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TITLE: Livin' In Recovery | Previous Challenge Entry
By Donna Tijou
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the last of the year,
I sent my love a letter
while I shed a little tear.
I don’t have an ipad,
tho’ I think they’re very fine.
But would you spare me a minute?
Could you lend a little time?
I listened quite intently,
my ear near the ground,
yet heard not a thing,
no, nary, not a sound.
I was very saddened
with the absence of reply.
I cried another tear,
and told a little lie.
I said:
I can do this thing,
livin’ in a digit-free zone.
I can get by quite nicely
without my cell phone.
The old rotary
attached to the wall
is all I'll need
when I want to make a call.
I can pay bills by check;
I can write with pen and ink.
Don’t need my computer,
just need time to think.
I can snap pics with camera
by pressin’ on the shutter,
and develop in a darkroom
just as smooth as spreadin’ butter.
I can spin vinyl records
and my old forty-fives,
on a phonograph and turntable,
playing music that revives.
With cover front and back,
I can read a printed book.
Don’t need to use a scroll
nor a Kindle or a Nook
Emails, texts or tweets,
this gal doesn’t need.
Don’t care how notes are sent,
or with what rate of speed.
I can mail letters in a box
with envelope and stamp,
just like kids writing home
from their summer camp.
I can look in a dictionary
and research an old tome.
sitting in a library
in a dark and dusty room.
I can record on tape
and play it reel to reel,
even watch analog TV,
while I eat my evening meal.
I can live the way
people used to do.
That’s what I tell myself
when I’m feeling blue.
This digital detox
is more than I can take.
I just pretend to like it
as happiness I fake
It seems that in recovery,
where nothin’s a click away,
and livin’ in rehab,
is where I need to stay.
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yesteryear in this clever entry. Well done, and truly on topic. Clever approach!
God bless~
This poem will "live".
You really put your best thought and work in this form. As I said above, I like what you did with the topic.