The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/14
Some vivid memories of the
yesteryear in this clever entry. Well done, and truly on topic. Clever approach!

God bless~
05/04/14
I loved re-living the way it used to be before technology took over our lives with its seductions and accompanying balls and chains. You are a wonderful lyrical poet - I hope you continue on this poetic journey and produce more thought provoking rhymes. I see poems that are lyrical but do not rhyme in your future as well, as lyrical writing and prose is often born after it's kindred rhymes.
05/04/14
Fun read! Good take on this week's topic.
I really like what you did with this topic.

This poem will "live".

You really put your best thought and work in this form. As I said above, I like what you did with the topic.