The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/14
Lots to ponder in this story. Powerful last sentence, for sure. Thanks for sharing.
04/18/14
Good solid story with a powerful wrap-up! Nicely done.

God bless~
04/21/14
This would make a nice devotional. I like the positive message of "Searching" that it brings. Keep writing.
This is quality article that I enjoyed reading very much! I hope you do well with this article, and will keep on writing enjoyable articles.

God Bless!
The opening paragraph and quoted statements went over my head. I didn't recognize the people or the conversations.

Later, when the comments were about studying the Bible, that part was clearer.

God's Holy Spirit within us should guide us so we are doing and being the person he wants us to be for the benefit of those around us.