The Official Writing Challenge
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Your last sentence summarizes your entire story beautifully.
I agree it was pretty frigid in the gym. I agree with Jan, the last sentence sums up the story nicely. God bless ya, littlelight
Great story,...I go the the gym and could see this happening! I think you flowed nicely from the first example into your main point and then ended with a good wrap up. Very nice.:)
Boy - you did a good job on this! I felt my anger rising just reading about the encounter! And then I also felt the struggle to find something to be tankful for - well done!
As it is winter again now, I pray you are having good day--because God is good! Thank you for sharing your heart, and your testimony in this story.