The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/14
Beautiful job with the topic. Your poem brings an important message to life.
Nicely done.

God bless~
04/19/14
Encore!

Very well written. This poem is very easy to understand, and it tells a remarkable story. Google doesn't have all the answers! (lol) Also, it was written to topic. Great job, keep writing.

PS: I hope the judges sees your potential.
I liked what you did with the theme word and connected it with searching in the Bible.

I also liked the two lines that contained "how could Google let me down?" Could you have used that about ever two stanzas? It might be interesting to be able to add that some way to make the poem symmetrical with those two lines added all along the way.

It is not bad the way it is but it might be interesting if something could be added.

Again, good work.
I usually do not care too much for poetry. However, I enjoyed your poem very much! If you submit poetry for future challenges, I will make sure to read & enjoy it as much as I have this poem.

God Bless!
04/24/14
Congrats! God bless~
Congrats! You did a great job with the poem. I am sure you will do well with next week's challenge.

God Bless!
04/24/14
Thanks, everyone!

I really enjoyed trying out poetry. Tomorrow my husband goes in for day surgery. Things have absolutely been wild this week, so I didn't make the Challenge.

Thanks for praying - Trudy