The Official Writing Challenge
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Cool! Great story and interesting take on the topic!
04/17/14
You're a very good story-teller and your dialogue was quite strong. I do believe God lays people on our hearts, even those we don't know, so that we can intercede in prayer on their behalf.
04/18/14
Your story pulled me in immediately. Well written with a superb dialogue between the two MC's.

Very well done.


God bless~






04/19/14
Very good use of the topic. Also I enjoy the ease of the dialogue. Just a quick observation, in the last line of the story: "she looks at me as says, “I have.” I think you probably mean "and" instead of "as." Keep writing.
04/20/14
Great writing - the pace was excellent, and dialogue convincing. The story pulled me in and held me through to the end. Terrific!
04/24/14
Jennifer Congrats! God bless~
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