The Official Writing Challenge
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Cool! Great story and interesting take on the topic!
You're a very good story-teller and your dialogue was quite strong. I do believe God lays people on our hearts, even those we don't know, so that we can intercede in prayer on their behalf.
Your story pulled me in immediately. Well written with a superb dialogue between the two MC's.

Very well done.

God bless~

Very good use of the topic. Also I enjoy the ease of the dialogue. Just a quick observation, in the last line of the story: "she looks at me as says, “I have.” I think you probably mean "and" instead of "as." Keep writing.
Great writing - the pace was excellent, and dialogue convincing. The story pulled me in and held me through to the end. Terrific!
Jennifer Congrats! God bless~
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