The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice article. I am a dog lover myself, and have a Pembroke Welsh Corgi named Annabelle. She would probably have a blast with your pup!
04/11/14
Awwww. Such an adorable story! I have a mini Schnauzer. I really enjoyed this story so much.

Playful and refreshing story withe a great message in closing.

God bless~
A very unique view of family life as seen from "Bo's eyes".

Told very well. Good use of time sequence in the story.

Novel way of presenting God through the eyes of one of his creations.

I liked it.
04/16/14
I am not a big fan of stories that relate events through the perspective of animals. There is nothing wrong with it, they just don't keep my interest and are not my thing.

I have to say, however, that as much as I wanted to stop reading this entry as soon as I realized it was from the perspective of a dog - I didn't. I read the darn thing all the way through, and it held my attention throughout. Considering there was no drama or conflict, that's a pretty good indication of a well crafted piece of writing.

Just don't write next week's entry from a cat's perspective - I have my limits! :)
04/17/14
Congrats!

God bless~