The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/14
Beautiful story about God is in control at all times, and He will never let us down.

Good beginning, you set up the immediate conflict, and kept us waiting to see how it'd all work out. God will always prevail.

Great job, I really enjoyed this. Thank you.

Keep writing for His glory.

God bless~
Hatred and envy is hidden all through the plot. If fact, they are what led up to the plotting.

The use of the word came at the right time and from the correct source. "Peace like a river comes" when our heart and faith are on accepting God's will in our lives.

I like how God took nine months "to save the day" and step in just at the right time to bring about the right ending to the story.