The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/14
You've employed many poetic elements in this amazing poem. It has a magical quality that dances in the mind. Love this!
03/19/14
I've been there - done this. Love your poem! If Beth says it's written well - then it's written well! All I know is - I enjoyed reading it and could relate. Well done!
Great poetry. Marvelous message. Congratulations on the EC win.

God bless~
03/21/14
Congratulations on Editor's Choice 7th place. Quite an accomplishment.
03/23/14
Your first line reminded me immediately of a lovely new Hillsong 'Oceans.' It began to play in my head as I finished your lovely poem-

He calls me out upon the water...
04/04/14
God Bless~