The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/14
Good story! You have a knack of weaving a tale quite well!

God bless~
03/16/14
What a neat story! I love it when a villain turns his life around for a good reason. This had a great western feel to it and I really like the details and atmosphere.

Just a tip, having two names with "J" in there, "Jessup" and "James" was a bit confusing, because I knew they were two different characters, but I wanted to read them as the same "J" because of they seemed to match.

Good job and nice take on the topic!
Yes, Jesus came to seek and save the lost. He is the good shepherd.

When anyone begins to believe that Jesus is Lord, he/she will begin to obey what Jesus commands.

I like the "old west" setting. We just don't have much written these days in that format.