The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/14
Good story! You have a knack of weaving a tale quite well!

God bless~
03/16/14
What a neat story! I love it when a villain turns his life around for a good reason. This had a great western feel to it and I really like the details and atmosphere.

Just a tip, having two names with "J" in there, "Jessup" and "James" was a bit confusing, because I knew they were two different characters, but I wanted to read them as the same "J" because of they seemed to match.

Good job and nice take on the topic!
03/16/14
Yes, Jesus came to seek and save the lost. He is the good shepherd.

When anyone begins to believe that Jesus is Lord, he/she will begin to obey what Jesus commands.

I like the "old west" setting. We just don't have much written these days in that format.