The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/14
Beautifully written and delivered! Thank you for this moving testimony of faith.

Well done.

God bless~
Your descriptions are so well done. It was very easy to imagine being right there in the story going through that big jump with her.
You have a very nice two part story. First comes the family scene that show the fear or lack of faith.

The second part is a scene we all must face: obeying God even when we are afraid to do so.

The second part was nicely related directly the the first example. Nicely done.

For the ease of our reading, you could double-space between the paragraphs.
03/18/14
I love the way you brought out the truth that the grace to jump into the unknown is indelibly tied to faith. All grace through faith. I have always wondered why Christians sometimes expect sinners to do in their own power what only God can do in their hearts through regenerative faith. I really enjoyed this illustrative story.