The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/14
Oh my goodness! I was on the edge of my seat with this riveting heart thumping testimony!

Thank the Lord, and Praise God for His mercy and hands of grace. Excellent job with your story, and certainly spot on for the topic.

Great job!

God bless~
03/16/14
Good job with adding in the suspense and atmosphere, knowing it was a true story made this all the more real when I understood your opening line.

Good job!
Well written true to life story.

Good warning to all about lifepreservers.

Good Samaritan rescuers could have just a little more detail.

The return of the boat might be an interesting story also.

Word count would have prevented more details of time involved in water leak, what caused it or how long it took for the whole rescue.

Good work on your story.