The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/05
Very enjoyable story. I echo the above comment. If it weren't for the grammatical errors and misplaced quotation marks, it would've been a very good piece. Keep writing, and edit, edit, edit! Read books and notice how they structure the dialogue, and imitate it. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
02/11/05
You hooked your reader from the beginning; good work. As the others said, don't forget to edit. It will make your good work even better!!

God bless,