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03/06/14
Beautiful job of bringing the topic into a well written story that fits today's times and aligns with the Bible so cohesively.

Yes, all these things must happen--according to Jesus-- and God is in control always. Plus Jesus warns us that false ones/prophets will come and fool many who don't know the Bible.

Jesus' words perfect as always and certainly for this entry!

Well done!

God bless~
03/08/14
A beautiful, sweet call to love The Lord. Well done. My oldest is only 22 months and I'm not looking forward to teaching her that the world is not always kind.
Wonderfully conceived and written. You won't be a beginner for long . . .
Yes, there is no one more without sin than a baptized believer in Jesus.

These may be warnings for us to be careful so we remain faithful til death.

This was a nice family style setting that would be familiar to many.

2 Timothy 2:15 and keep writing.
I love the comfort to be found in your well written entry. You're much more than a beginner!
03/09/14
Nice devotional! Someday, I'm sure, we will know all the answers. Till then we just have to trust the Lord knows what He is doing.

Blessing for you and your family. LaVonne
03/11/14
Well done, so well written, great devotional! Blessings!
03/11/14
A tender and heartfelt approach to this week's topic! Your entry contains such a great reminder that we can rest in God no matter what is happening around us.

I take part in Jan's Writing Basics (on the fW forum), and she did a recent lesson on devotionals. This lesson pointed out that people often skim over Bible verses that are placed at the beginning of a devotional. Maybe it's because we like to know how a verse relates to the story. Here's a link to the lesson if you're interested: http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?f=67&t=37754

Your love and distress for your precious child comes through so beautifully. We so long to protect our children from the darkness in the world, but we must prepare them too and point them to Jesus. You did a great job of sharing this tenderness and truth.
03/13/14
Congrats! God bless~
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