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02/27/14
So many times I refer to Joseph's life and how it was God that traded in His ashes for beauty ultimately lifting him from his circumstances...I love this story.

Good job with telling it through your poem, and I absolutely love the ending!

Nicely done.

God bless~
03/01/14
Clever with a good ending - thanks for sharing!
Nice re-telling of the story in poetry form. I loved the ending of it, very humorous. Thanks for writing it!
Nicely told Bible story.

Nice rhyming words.

This took some thought so keep up the good work.
03/02/14
I enjoyed this story in the form of a poem. It is one of my favourites in the Bible and you certainly got all the main points in your well-presented poem. (The spelling of the word favourite is a U.K. spelling).