The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/14
Thank you for this touching and introspective entry. Well written and well delivered.

I especially loved this:
Freedom from the bondage of self only comes from salvation.

That sums it up with a powerful message.

God bless~
02/22/14
Great personal testimony - I hope you have the opportunity to share it often, and get it "out there" to bless others.
02/25/14
This is a well told testimony. Many can relate to your anger in the midst of a divorce.

I think that this piece would be even stronger with some dialogue to bring the scenes to life. You could use it in a scene with your wife to show readers how you were drifting apart.

You have a great ending with a powerful last line. I look forward to reading more of your writing.