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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: At Witís End (02/13/14)

TITLE: The Solution
By Grace Merkey
02/19/14


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The Solution

Does someone you love cause you grief?
No matter what, thereís no relief?
Words of wisdom they will not hear.
The problem will not disappear.

Best teacher is experience,
Not others, but your own makes sense.
You hate to see them make mistakes.
The results cause many heartaches.

When you have come to your witís end,
Time on your knees you need to spend.
On us God will never give up
No matter how much we foul up.

The Bible is with wisdom filled,
How things happened the way God willed.
God wants to speak to us today.
Listen to what He has to say.

He has the answer it is true,
To what we should think, say and do.
Answers for us and those we love
He wants to send us from above.

So no matter how bad things are
The answer is near and not far.
God wants to help us and He will
When we will listen and be still.


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Camille (C D) Swanson 02/21/14
I loved this: God wants to help us and He will
When we will listen and be still.


Beautiful words of truth and timely reminders of God's love and promises.

God bless~
Toni Babcock 02/22/14
What a needful reminder - simple yet profound - very nicely done!
Phyllis Inniss 02/23/14
Your title fits this simple yet effective poem with its rhyming couplets. Rhyming couplets always make for an interesting read that keeps the mind alert. Your solution is right on target. God bless!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 02/27/14
Congratulations on ranking 7 in your level! The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.