The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a good point to make here. My advice is to check words over more carefully before submitting. It would have read easier if you changed the word obedience to obedient in some of the places. Also be careful with there/their and to/too, they can trip many of us up when we are hit with inspiration and typing away!
I agree with the comment above. You have some great content; it is a shame to take away from it. Maybe a bit more length and some paragraphs would be helpful also. God bless,