The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/14
Powerfully entertaining in a somber and resourceful way. Nicely done.

God bless~
02/24/14
I love this! Your word choices are so eloquent. You've majestically written poetic verse for this Bible event. How cool that the ESV actually uses "wit's end" in its version! Your title is excellent!
Good poem. Nicely written. It is God's Holy Spirit who convicts us of sin and righteousness. It is up to us to choose to come to his heart in obedience.

I like the consistent last line.
Loved your second last verse. Very powerful.
Well done and well written.
Thanks for your info at the end. Very interesting.
Blessings
Norms
02/27/14
Congratulations!

God bless~