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02/13/14
Such a powerful entry, great messages and thoughts.

Great job!

God bless~
02/13/14
Great stuff. The line about tears clearing out the eyes will stay with me for some time.
I appreciate your illustration that we all have desperation in different degrees and define it uniquely as well. I also enjoyed how you showed that we all need God, even though some of us never get the opportunity to realize it. It's important to recognize our need for God before the severity of our desperate situation becomes too severe to overcome. This is an important message that will benefit many people facing all levels of desperation!!!
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