The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/14
Oooh! Really eerie...So glad at the ending!
Sweet Jesus to the rescue once again.

Good job.

God bless~
02/13/14
I wish I hadn't read this minutes before going to bed. Super creepy but I'm pretty sure you nailed the characters. Well done.
I love the gruesomeness of the evil spirits. It makes them seem so realistic and tangible. THe Bible teaches us that our enemies are not flesh and blood but powers and principalities. I loved it!! I also loved the demonstration of the simplicity of Salvation at the end. Amazing!!
02/18/14
You are officially now not to refer to yourself as a "beginner" writer. This story blew me away - it was awesome. Great setting the scene; great beginning, great middle, great climax, and great end; Just plain GREAT!
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level!! The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
I'm sorry I meant 6th. You still did an outstanding job!