The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
"...As life's equinox dictated
A more mellow season..."

Really nice phrase. A fitting tribute; thanks for writing it.
11/21/05
I truly enjoyed the descriptive verse, which kept getting richer and had more depth towards the end.
God bless ya, littlelight
11/25/05
Wow, Wow. Well Done.
Thank You. Helen
This is pretty good. You should have submitted this in the intermediate level atleast. I love the many picturesque phrases you've used. Very descriptive.

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