The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/05
I think you've done a good job here in showing (which is stronger than merely telling) your point. The examples you chose - Jonah, the elder brother and the Pharisee - each show a different aspect of an obedience of the letter but not the spirit of the law. This is a perceptive observation on your part and that is conveyed by your piece. Also, your title is very fitting for your content.
Very thought provoking! I love your examples. God bless,
Absolutely lovely, Carol! I love your ability to teach using rhyme! Love always, leesha