The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/14
Fantastic story with a superbly profound message. It was well written and well told. It had so many layers to think about.

It had somber moments, and funny moments (Alma losing her teeth in her tea and then on the floor made me smile) and it had a universal appeal and message that was defined in the last paragraph that said it all.

Nicely done.

God bless~
02/06/14
A very sweet story well told.
Very thoughtful writing.

There seemed to be a close understanding of the condition of the main character.

The two visiting characters showed the wide range of reactions to the condition displayed by the main character.

Good lesson for each of us. Do we want to be the kind that lose our teeth?
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