The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed reading this:) You really made the story come alive with a whole new approach.
Wonderful! Thank you for the insight into Sarah's joyous heart . . .
02/04/14
Aww...this was beautifully written and done.

I loved it.

God bless~
Congratulations on a spectacular story. What a creative take on the topic. I think you did a fantastic job of developing your MC. You also totally nailed the topic in so many different ways: daring to hope for a child, waiting through the aches and pains of pregnancy, actual childbirth itself, and then the plans for this important baby to ready the way for the true Light. Simply Brilliant!
02/06/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
02/08/14
Very unique piece! I loved it.