The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/14
Excellent work! Powerful entry and right on topic.

God bless~
01/31/14
Wow, this was a white knuckle read - I thoroughly felt your anxiety in that tunnel. I didn't quite connect with the ending about Manhattan and more quite time - wasn't sure what you were getting at with that.
02/03/14
I get the ending perfectly :).
This held my attention all the way through, and you conveyed the stress of the situation well. I would have liked to see just a little more responses on faces shown. Yet a good job!
Keep submitting!
02/06/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
Excellent! My teeth and hands are still clenched . . .
Congratulations!
Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
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