The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/14
Good story with a moral on not jumping ahead of God. I wonder if you could add a little more at the end so the reader experiences how the woman felt when she opened that envelope. (What she thought etc.)
01/25/14
Powerful and such a great devotion to God and His infinite mercy and love.

Fantastic job with this!

God bless~
01/29/14
A touching story, with a good message. You did a good job with short paragraphs.

I think you might have used their names just a bit too much. Perhaps the story would be even better if you show some of the emotions through facial expressions and gestures.

Good work, keep it up!~
01/30/14
Congratulations!

Keep Winging His Words!
01/30/14
Congrats!!! I LOVED THIS!
Nice job...happy for you.

God bless~