The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/14
Thank you for this glimpse into your thought processes. Truly, every life needs meaning or it is not worth living. We all find that meaning through a relationship with our redeemer and creator. Blessings!
01/18/14
Great testimony piece. I like the way it started out with questions to get the reader thinking. I got a little bogged down toward the end when I wasn't exactly sure what the writer meant to say. The part that goes, "All the uncertainties I have been facing by always trying to live a life against all odds and having very little peace about it apart from trying to prove myself to the world..." I was not quite sure what the writer meant - I think it could be re-worded to get the message across more clearly. The piece ends very well, pointing the reader to the One who can answer life's toughest questions.
01/19/14
I like the use of the "living story" analogy... your entry is a nice take on the topic presented. Keep writing.
This was my favorite part of the whole piece:
"I returned to the One who knew my story. The one who created me and placed His everlasting love and calling in me—a story with no end in Him."

Though the message was clear, there were times I got confused with all of the questions. Be careful using the word "live" when it should be "life."

I enjoyed it.
01/22/14
I really enjoyed your piece! It was well written with the exception a few technical issues. You had a few sentences that could have been broken down into smaller ones to make it a more comfortable read. Aside from that, you did a great job and stayed on topic. Good luck and God bless!