The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting story. The scenes were easy to follow.

I thought it well written with the concerns and emotions of each person drawn out.

When each person is given to god's will, their lives are worthwhile.
A well written, interesting read here. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful. Great potential for further episodes. This is a great story. . .

Please "throw a brick" for others to enjoy, comment and support your writing:

Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
Thank you for this entry! I hope you'll keep writing and submitting.