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This was a nice use of the theme to show that God can take care of problems.

I liked the consistent length of verse and the rhyming of words.

It takes more work but you may want to have the rhyming words stay in the same place as the first verse.

You did will with this poem story.
12/13/13
This is a great free verse form poem that tells a really interesting take of the elephant in the room. I don't think you meant to rhyme in all places. I liked this. Keep writing.

Powerful sentiments - great entry. . .

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Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
12/17/13
Different than all the others.
An interesting take on the topic.

I like free-verse type poems. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching for your next entry.