The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great devotion. It pulled me in right away There have been several stories this week about the stealthy nature of Satan, but you attacked it from a fresh angle. I enjoyed the POV.

A good proofreader would help you catch little things like the lowercase people in Peter, a missing apostrophe in God's, and the use of ellipses. Don't hesitate to ask someone whom you respect to be your challenge buddy or if they can suggest someone.

Also on the message boards there is a thread called Jan's Writing Basics. Jan has lessons ideal for every level writer. She is diligent about responding to everyone who posts.

You have a knack for this genre. You made me stop and reflect and examine the Scriptures. I can feel your passion and love for Christ and for the people in whom God has entrusted to you. Keep writing.
11/30/13
Powerful, compelling, and excellent job with this weeks topic.

Great job. I loved it.

God bless~
12/04/13
You have included so much in your devotional - creation, the fall of Satan and one third of the angels, Christ as God's plan of salvation, and the Great Commission! A great message to the saved and unsaved as well. Great job! Blessings,LaVonne