The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story in poem form.

About the poems, I am of the old school of thought. I like to have the same number of lines in each verse. This usually takes a lot of extra editing - more than just editing for a story - and this takes extra time.

I like the rhyming you used. This also takes a lot of word searching and a good ear.

I liked how it taught a lesson we should consider for our own lives.
11/23/13
Aww, this touched my heart. You wrote this straigth from your heart and it will no doubt touch other hearts as well. Good job.

God bless~
11/26/13
I enjoyed this poem. A couple of the rhymes sounded just a little bit forced. I struggle with that also. The message was clear and well written. Good Job.