The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/13
This was certainly an interesting approach to the topic at hand. Clever and unusual, especially with the "unicorn" at the end.

Good job.

God bless~
11/25/13
I liked this take on the familiar story.
Good job. Keep writing. Thank you.
03/19/14
Larry,
Thanks for reading and commenting on my story. Yours is a fun take on a terrible event. Oh for the day we walk again in the garden with our Lord!