The Official Writing Challenge
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What you say seems all to be true. (Too bad for us.)

With most poems, I like to read in a rhythm with the same number of lines in each group. I liked the lines that had rhyming words.

Editing of poems take a lot of time trying to get the lines to all fit in a pattern and then finding words to rhyme.

It is not an easy job but I can see you are working at it.
I enjoyed your entry and the meaningful message it conveyed. Nicely done.

God bless~
Thank you for sharing your poem here. I enjoyed it. I had just a touch of difficulty relating it to the topic, though I assume that God's word at the end is meant to be the relation. Hope you'll keep submitting and growing with the rest of us.
Good job.
Congrats! God bless~
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