The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/05
So sweet! Very touching too. This could be expanded into a longer story sometime. You've done well!
11/15/05
Oh I loved this so much! MAde me choke up. I was surprised at the ending and was so pleased by it too. I like how you started with her diary. This one was really special. Thanks.
11/15/05
Very good job! Nice touch not giving the POV until later. Touching, and a good job not over-telling the story.
11/16/05
Wow This was great! So well told! *clap, clap*
11/16/05
Yes, very good job saving the POV 'til half-way through. And a delightful ending. Great job on this!
11/16/05
Wow. I love the story and how you put it together. Bravo.
11/17/05
Well crafted and well written piece. Cute story - a real heart warmer. Creative "Beautiful" entry.
Blessings, Lynda
Cute, sweet! Brought tears to my eyes!
11/20/05
Delightful story. Glad he fessed up. If you expanded this it would be interesting to now how much of a sacrifice it was for Ken to shave his head. Yeggy
Congratulations on your well-deserved win this week. Well constructed with a nice surprise ending. Kudos!
11/21/05
Congratulations on your Sweet win. A Sweet written story “The Eyes of Love” Thanks for sharing. Helen