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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Like a Fish Out of Water (10/24/13)

TITLE: Goldfish in the Master's hands
By Nicole Van Der Merwe


I was watching the goldfish swim round and round in the fish bowl. He looked like he was pulling faces at me. I wondered if fish ever rested and what it felt like to touch one. Then I had this brilliant brainwave. What if I took him out of the fish bowl for just a second? I wanted to feel what it felt like to touch a fish. No one would ever find out. A few seconds without water would not hurt the fish.

I put my hand inside the bowl and tried to catch the little fella but his slimy little body kept slipping through my fingers. That should have rung alarm bells as I finally grabbed the little guy and fished him out of the bowl. At that very moment he slipped out of my hands and landed on the table with a thud. I was mortified and panicked as I tried to catch him and put him back in his bowl. Oh no, he kept on slipping out of my hands and flopping about on the table. What was I going to do? How was I going to explain to my parents why the goldfish died? Just then I was able to scoop him back into the bowl and watch him swim round and round as though nothing had happened. I sighed with relief and watched him for a few minutes making sure he was ok. After I was satisfied Mr Goldfish was well I ran up to bed and finally fell asleep.

At the crack of dawn I ran down the stairs to check if the goldfish was still alive. I got to the dining room table and to my horror I saw his lifeless body floating in the bowl. Surprisingly when my parents found me staring at the fishbowl, they never asked me if I knew what had happened to him.

My dad just took the bowl, disposed of the fish and explained to me that these things sometimes happen and I should not get distressed about it.
In my heart I was riddled with guilt and wanted to tell my dad it was my fault. I stood there looking at my father trying to build up the courage to tell the truth. Finally I decided to keep it a secret and not tell anyone. Nobody had witnessed the incident and after all it was a terrible accident.

Fish cannot live out of water just as we cannot survive without oxygen. God created us to be in relationship with Him. We are like fish out of water flopping around aimlessly in this world. We think we are ok as long as we dip into our spiritual ponds once in a while. Satanís life work is to fish us out of the pond and expose us to an environment which is lethal to us eventually resulting in spiritual death. He is the Father of all lies and itís not ok to stay out of the Fathers presence for even a few seconds. He has given each one of us a special purpose and has planted us exactly where we should be.

We root ourselves in the word of God and let his Spirit lead and guide us into His holy presence where we will be nurtured and live forever. Amen.

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Grace Merkey11/04/13
This is a good analogy. I'm wondering if you ever confessed.
C D Swanson 11/04/13
Oh this was excellent! Although I'm sorry to have learned the goldfish died...it was a powerful segue into a prolific message. The part of Satan wanting to take us "out of the pond and expose us" was nothing short of brilliant.

Very well done!!

God Bless~

"Oh and perhaps that wasn't your fault with the goldfish. Maybe the little guy was older than you thought!"
Amelia Brown 11/04/13
This is a very good piece. I like the transitions made, it allowed the story to flow; and the ending was tied in nicely. Well done. Keep writing.
C D Swanson 11/07/13
Congratulations! God Bless~