The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/13
Wow - Powerful and moving. Your descriptive piece held my attention. Very well done and very deep.

God bless~
11/04/13
There is truth to your piece; when push comes to shove, we can sometimes over look our awkward situation and spill our guts.

This is my favorite line: "Although we may feel like a fish out of water we soon breathe no longer through gills but through lungs."