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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Beautiful (11/07/05)

TITLE: Listening To His Voice
By Laurie Glass
11/13/05


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Despairing woman so convinced,
Is taken in by dreadful lies.
She must be thin no matter what.
Her greatest worth is in her size.

Afraid of food and gaining weight,
Is paralyzed and can’t let go.
Won’t let herself enjoy a meal
Although restricting hurts her so.

Conflicting thoughts run rampantly.
It feels so good and yet so wrong.
She turns her back on what is best,
Desire for control so strong.

Keeps bottled up so deep within,
Her anger, sadness and despair.
Dark secrets safely locked away,
Strong guilt and shame won’t let her share.

She thinks so little of herself,
Degrading thoughts bombard her mind.
To others offers only grace,
But to herself is so unkind.

She hears Him say she’s beautiful,
Yet hard to honestly believe.
But on her own she can’t break free,
Endeavors to His truths receive.

A shadow of your former self,
I will not let you waste away.
Please listen now with all your heart
And hear the truth I have to say.

Confused, depressed and all alone,
Distorted thoughts won’t let you see
How beautiful you really are
Or your identity in Me.

It truly does begin inside,
This freedom journey you’ve begun.
Express yourself and lean on Me.
This road is not an easy one.

When feeling anxious and afraid,
Invite Me to your table then.
I’ll strengthen you and calm your fears,
Will sit beside you as your friend.

When lies and doubts are taunting you,
Turn then to Me and take my hand
And know I made you as you are
So I can use you as I’ve planned.

Reject the lies, embrace the truth
And let yourself through My eyes see.
You’ll get a glimpse, My precious one
How beautiful you are to Me.


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Carol Adams11/16/05
Very well done. You said it so well. I have friends and family who have eating disorders and what you speak of in poem form is right on. The Lord sees each as beautiful no exceptions! Thanks for sharing.
Pat Guy 11/16/05
This is precious. And I hope you submit this to other publications. It's deserving to be read by others and I feel God will use this to begin their healing. A very special poem!
Anita Neuman11/16/05
This is really well-done. Your rhythm is great and the whole poem flows nicely. My only suggestion would be to add an extra space where you switch to Christ's point of view. Great job!
Kell-Ann Hoyte11/16/05
A beautiful poem with an even more beautiful message. Keep writing.
Cassie Memmer11/16/05
Wonderful truth. I think there's a ministry here? Good job!
Linda Watson Owen11/16/05
Wonderful, Laurie! So real, so beautiful, and such a needed voice speaking for those suffering in the distress of eating disorders.
Julianne Jones11/17/05
Oh my! This was so good and with such a timely message. I felt the last line of 3rd stanza interrupted the rhythm but that could just be me. The rest was excellent. Well done.
Jeffrey Snell11/17/05
A nice look inside a troubled mind. Careful of meter. I liked how you ended this. Good effort!
Garnet Miller 11/17/05
Self image is so important and it is the one thing that this society is most critical of besides poverty. Woman undereat and overeat because they lack the vision to see the true beauty in themselves.You are right, only God can lift the heavy yoke from their necks and free them to be who they are in Jesus Christ! Thanks for sharing:)
Val Clark11/20/05
Particularly like this line: 'To others offers only grace,/But to herself is so unkind.' Too easy to be too hard on ourselves in any area of our life. Ooop that'd be me! Thanks. Yeggy
Beth Muehlhausen11/20/05
Loved this! You said it all...didn't leave anything out. An honest, but hopeful, look into a troubled human heart. Great job!! :-)
Debbie OConnor11/20/05
A great message about a tough lesson to learn.
Debbie Sickler11/20/05
I loved the line "Her greatest worth is in her size." Unfortunately women do base so much of their self worth on their appearance. It can have devastating effects on their lives. You did a terrific job portraying the inner struggle. I'm sure many people, men included will be able to identify with this. Great job, again!
DeAnna Brooks11/21/05
To know in God's eyes, I'm Beautiful... so hard to grasp, yet so essential to bask in such love. Congratulations, Laurie, on your win. You've captured wonderfully the struggle we have, to let go of control, to rejoice simply in being the Beloveds.
Dan Louise Mann11/21/05
Congratulations on your win this week. Well deserved! Kudos!
Helen Harris11/21/05
“Reject the lies, embrace the truth
And let yourself through My eyes see.
You’ll get a glimpse, My precious one
How beautiful you are to Me.”
Wells deserve first Place Win. This is a Beautiful message with a Great Title. Thank you for sharing
Laurie. Blessing, Helen
B Brenton11/24/05
Well deserved, Laurie.
A heart-warmer!
Deborah Porter 01/13/06
Laurie, I'm just re-reading the winning entries now as I go through and do the minor editing for the next FaithWriters' Anthology.

This poem touched my heart so much. Believe it or not, I've been there too. It was the darkest time in my life, but God brought me through - by His grace.

I'm so glad that this poem is going into the anthology. It is the perfect addition.

Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator and Editor, FaithWriters' Magazine)
Tony Rowsey01/26/06
I thought this was an awesome and lovely piece of work, that has great format and flow and wonderful rhymes. It was a true joy to read. God bless.

Tony Rowsey aka seekye


   
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