The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the internal reflection of Matthew's emotions. It was well done.

Thanks. God bless~
This is a great story. You pulled me in right away with the wonderful conflict. I also enjoyed how you built the character and gave him depth. I was about halfway in before it dawned on me who Matthew was. (For me, that's really good and a delightful treat.) I enjoyed every bit of this piece.
Wow, very nice and very captivating. You held my attention from the first sentence and kept it right through out the story. I like the the fresh perspective that you gave to an old Bible story. You even took us further into Matthew's life while growing up! I had no idea it was a Bible story until the preacher was introduced. Then you ended the story on a high climax, with him forsaking all and happily skipping off into the sunset. Thank you for sharing.
I don't know if I could say any more.

This flowed like it only took minutes to write but I would assume then more time in proof reading.
Congratulations on placing 1st in your level and 20 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
Congrats! you deserved it :-)
Good job! Nice take on the subject!
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Nicely written and quite possible perspective into Matthew's world. Congratulations on your level win-write on!
Very well written. Your story had good flow and conflict resolution. Congratulations on placing 1st in your division and 20th overall.