The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
Simply powerful! Excellent job with this, I had to take a look to see if I was reading from "beginners."

Loved it. God bless~
08/22/13
Simply superb.

I especially liked that although your poem was mostly free verse, you sprinkled it with a little bit of rhyme. The imagery and parallelism there was highly effective.
08/24/13
I really enjoyed this message! The poem was powerful and filled me with a sense of urgency, not wanting to waste anytime on being distracted away from the only message that matters...the Gospel! Thank you :)
08/29/13
Congrats! God bless~