The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
I love this, and I'm stunned to see it on Level 1. Simply outstanding. I love that even on a second read, I'm unable to tell for sure whether the narrator was black or white, and I love the ambiguous ending. You're an outstanding writer.
08/22/13
Wow - this was story-telling at its all time best!

Great job. I loved it!

God bless~
Wow. A retired President came to mind . . .