The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
The title and the flow of your poem work together to paint a marvelous picture of grace.

Be careful of the word it's--with an apostrophe, it means it is or it has. You wanted its in your first stanza. Similarly, I'd encourage you to use more punctuation in your poem. Traditional rhymed and metered poetry is typically punctuated just as prose is, and I think that would make improve your poem's flow.

I like the way you incorporated this week's prompt, and your poem was quite lovely.
08/22/13
I love it! Beautiful words and beautiful meaning.

God bless~
enjoyed your poem, very much! Look forward to reading more of your writing.
Absolutely exquisite . . .
Absolutely exquisite . . .
08/29/13
Congrats! God Bless~