The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/13
I enjoyed this. You made a good point. I like how you shared a personal experience and then turned it into a lovely message.
08/15/13
It took me a little while to see what you were saying in the first two sentences when you seemed to switch from "your father" - he to she.

Also I was a little confused about the singer. Was she someone who had lived in South America and moved to Columbus or was it just the name you were talking about.

That was at least an interesting name.

Yes, Jesus in some ways may be thought of as "exotic" since he is not only a prophet but a priest and king all in one.
08/16/13
I thoroughly enjoyed this brief devotional. Well done.
08/19/13
I love a short entry that turns out to be so powerful! Nicely done.

God bless~