The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful story. You covered the topic in so many different ways. You had me smiling, chuckling and picturing the scenery. Great bit of writing.
Very nice story in dialog form.

Dialogs are usually difficult for me. I'll have to work on mine.

I was a little confused when the "Atlantic" showed up until Angola was named, then it was OK. I had myself on some Pacific island.

Nice work.
08/16/13
I liked your story, well written.
08/19/13
I really enjoyed this piece. Great writing here!

God bless~
08/22/13
Congrats! God bless~
Congratulations on your EC and your beautiful first place ribbon! Happy Dance!!!
08/22/13
Congratulations Jennifer on your win, this was a beautiful story!
08/22/13
Congrats on your level win and your EC Jennifer, well done.
08/23/13
Congratulations! Thumbs up!

Wing His Words
08/24/13
Loved how you illustrated God's power demonstrated in the missionary's weakness. Well written and congrats on your level win.
08/25/13
You writing talent is showing. :-) Great title! You caught my attention from the very first sentence and held it to the perfect ending. No surprise here that you are among the top 10.

Congratulations!