The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/13
This is a beautiful story. You covered the topic in so many different ways. You had me smiling, chuckling and picturing the scenery. Great bit of writing.
08/15/13
Very nice story in dialog form.

Dialogs are usually difficult for me. I'll have to work on mine.

I was a little confused when the "Atlantic" showed up until Angola was named, then it was OK. I had myself on some Pacific island.

Nice work.
08/16/13
I liked your story, well written.
08/19/13
I really enjoyed this piece. Great writing here!

God bless~
08/22/13
Congrats! God bless~
08/22/13
Congratulations on your EC and your beautiful first place ribbon! Happy Dance!!!
08/22/13
Congratulations Jennifer on your win, this was a beautiful story!
08/22/13
Congrats on your level win and your EC Jennifer, well done.
08/23/13
Congratulations! Thumbs up!

Wing His Words
08/24/13
Loved how you illustrated God's power demonstrated in the missionary's weakness. Well written and congrats on your level win.
08/25/13
You writing talent is showing. :-) Great title! You caught my attention from the very first sentence and held it to the perfect ending. No surprise here that you are among the top 10.

Congratulations!