The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/13
WOW - this was deep and I like how it leaves the reader with many paths of thought. I feel it's a "Look at me I'm a good Christian" and when in reality, "I've never put into practice my beliefs, or emulated Christ in my daily life." So, if that was your intent, I think this story is brilliant, with a subtle, yet deafening message.

Nicely done!!

God bless~
08/10/13
You've packed quite a powerful message into this eloquent poem. It gives the reader much to think about. Great job!