The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. You drew me in with your dialog and interesting characters. You may need to brush up on some punctuation rules, but overall you did a great job. I loved the ending and didn't see it coming at all. This is one of my favorites so far this week. Nicely done.
Oh, I really enjoyed this. It was such a good entry. Very well done.

God bless~
Thoroughly enjoyable with a great message. Well done.
I enjoyed reading this. You words brought life to the characters. Keep writing.