The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/13
Wow, what a great story. I relished it from beginning to end. Still savoring it as I type this. Excellent job!
I loved the surprise twist at the end--warmed my heart!
This is a sweet story and I enjoyed the twist at the end. In retrospect, some of the dialog doesn't match a 9 yo. I love having twists in my stories too and sometimes it can be hard to stay true to the character and keep the twist going. As a parent, I can totally relate to feeling humbled by my kids. Sometimes we parents can be blown away by the wonderful example our kids give us. Nice job.
08/04/13
Awww. This was an adorable story that left me with a great feeling. Good job with bringing forward an important message in Jesus Christ.



God bless~
08/08/13
Congratulations! God bless~