The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, what a great story. I relished it from beginning to end. Still savoring it as I type this. Excellent job!
I loved the surprise twist at the end--warmed my heart!
This is a sweet story and I enjoyed the twist at the end. In retrospect, some of the dialog doesn't match a 9 yo. I love having twists in my stories too and sometimes it can be hard to stay true to the character and keep the twist going. As a parent, I can totally relate to feeling humbled by my kids. Sometimes we parents can be blown away by the wonderful example our kids give us. Nice job.
Awww. This was an adorable story that left me with a great feeling. Good job with bringing forward an important message in Jesus Christ.

God bless~
Congratulations! God bless~