The Official Writing Challenge
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We don't always know where we will be or what we will be doing when we follow the Lord's leading.

Is he leading you in the area of writing also?

Follow his leading.
07/27/13
Lovely to read of your acceptance of God's will in your life.

You had many more words to work with; I'd suggest that you add specific anecdotes or conversations that will help the reader to better understand your decisions and to feel as if we know you better. For example, even after reading this I don't know your gender or your age. Adding more personal touches and specific events will help you to draw the readers in.

Your writing shows great promise, and I encourage you to keep at it!
07/29/13
Like Jan, I would like to know more about you.

I do like your message and I am confident you will succeed at whatever you do as long as you continue following God's leading.

Thanks and keep writing.