The Official Writing Challenge
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When the Lord leads, success happens.

Nice, well written story.
07/27/13
Well-written article with a good message.

Two suggestions: always capitalize 'Bible.' Also, this would benefit from a more personal touch--perhaps an anecdote from the Bible study that illustrates the womens' differences and how they were overcome. This would make the article more relatable to your readers. Conflict and resolution always draw readers in.

I'm heartened to read of the oneness of God's body in your community, and of your part in bringing that about. Well done!
07/27/13
I enjoyed reading this. Well written and easy to read and undestand. Keep writing.
07/29/13
Your entry is well written and interesting. So glad to hear about your efforts to bring believers together. That is a very important need in our area too.

Keeping writing.
08/01/13
Congrats and God Bless~
Congratulations for ranking 2 in your level and 21 overall!! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)